more doc improvements

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From: Neil Conway <neilc(at)samurai(dot)com>
To: PostgreSQL Patches <pgsql-patches(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: more doc improvements
Date: 2003-02-18 02:51:59
Message-ID: 1045536719.32100.56.camel@tokyo
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This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:

- more work from the SGML police

- some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
contractions where (IMHO) appropriate

- fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs

- improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages

Cheers,

Neil
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From: Bruce Momjian <pgman(at)candle(dot)pha(dot)pa(dot)us>
To: Neil Conway <neilc(at)samurai(dot)com>
Cc: PostgreSQL Patches <pgsql-patches(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: more doc improvements
Date: 2003-02-18 05:19:50
Message-ID: 200302180519.h1I5Jon18832@candle.pha.pa.us
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Your patch has been added to the PostgreSQL unapplied patches list at:

http://momjian.postgresql.org/cgi-bin/pgpatches

I will try to apply it within the next 48 hours.

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Neil Conway wrote:
> This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:
>
> - more work from the SGML police
>
> - some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
> contractions where (IMHO) appropriate
>
> - fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs
>
> - improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages
>
> Cheers,
>
> Neil
> --
> Neil Conway <neilc(at)samurai(dot)com> || PGP Key ID: DB3C29FC
>
>

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From: Bruce Momjian <pgman(at)candle(dot)pha(dot)pa(dot)us>
To: Neil Conway <neilc(at)samurai(dot)com>
Cc: PostgreSQL Patches <pgsql-patches(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: more doc improvements
Date: 2003-02-19 04:06:07
Message-ID: 200302190406.h1J467o04141@candle.pha.pa.us
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Patch applied. Thanks.

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Neil Conway wrote:
> This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:
>
> - more work from the SGML police
>
> - some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
> contractions where (IMHO) appropriate
>
> - fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs
>
> - improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages
>
> Cheers,
>
> Neil
> --
> Neil Conway <neilc(at)samurai(dot)com> || PGP Key ID: DB3C29FC
>
>

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